Wednesday, February 13, 2008

The Second Ending!

I am happy to post this next entry in the Ending Challenge---I'd say this writer is taking it to the literary genre:

The door slammed on the squad car and the thing settled under his
weight. She'd kicked him, once in the ribs as he lay bound and his
body had had no give to it but instead felt rubbery and he'd grinned
but only at the cement floor. The car was gone, now. The neighborhood
felt cold to her, ignorant, and she started to cry knowing, in an
hour, two she would find herself wishing she had done much worse.

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